Agent and editor and everyone with whom I shared the title all seemed on board with it, and I was hopeful that it would make it through to the actual book. At the same time, I've been around the block a few times when it comes to book titles, and I knew full well that proposed title changes from the publisher, and the addition of a long and clunky sub-title, were very real possibilities.
When the publisher finally did propose a new title--and the expected long and clunky sub-title--just as I was finishing the book in November, I didn't much like it. I still don't love it. I prefer my title: three words, simple and elegant. You won't find much simplicity or elegance in the new title: Distracted: Why Students Can't Focus and What You Can Do About It. When this title first showed up in my e-mail, I had two immediate objections.
First, as I explained to my editor, this title makes it sound like I am blaming students for their distractions, or kids-these-days-ing, which is the opposite of what I am doing. The book argues that we should have empathy for distracted students because distraction is endemic to the human condition, impacting teachers and students alike. As a result, we should stop worrying about how to wall out distractions from the classroom and instead think creatively about how to cultivate attention. My editor rightly pointed out that this sentiment isn't ruled out by the new title, and that in fact my original title could equally have been interpreted as blaming students for their distractions. True enough.
The other problem I have comes from the part of me that loves beautiful sentences. The one word title Distracted works just fine, but that subtitle . . . oh, that subtitle. It's almost as bad as the other two subtitles that were foisted upon me by previous publishers: Small Teaching: Everyday Lessons from the Science of Learning and On Course: A Week-by-Week Guide to Your First Semester of College Teaching. Those subtitles ain't poetry, folks. They're not even that great as prose.
My first inclination was to dig in my heels and fight for my original title, but it didn't take me long to decide that the fight wasn't worth it, and might not even be in my best interest. In the publishing process, I've come to believe that, for the most part, we should all let each other do our jobs. The editor should trust me to write the book, I should trust the editor to give me good feedback, I should trust the cover artist to catch the eye of readers, and I should trust the marketing people to know what kinds of subtitles show up in search engines and sell books.
Ultimately, unless you're writing a literary work of some kind, that's what titles and subtitles are for: to sell books. I love to write, and I love to publish books, but selling them is another story. I'm happy to let the experts guide me and my book through that process. So that's where we have landed. The book that appears on November 17, 2020, will be called Distracted: Why Students Can't Focus and What You Can Do About It.
The argument that really clinched the new title for me came when my editor reported to me the outcome of a meeting in which the editors pitched their forthcoming titles to the marketing and sales teams. When my editor presented my book with its new title, excitement in the room was high. People were requesting advance copies just so they could read the book for themselves. If the title can generate that kind of excitement even within the publicity team, I'm willing to live with it.
In the end, I hope that my regular readers will know that I wouldn't come near a kids-these-days approach with a ten-foot pole. I hope they will trust me enough to expect an empathetic and creative approach toward the cultivation of attention in the classroom. I hope that the publisher is right that the title will pull in new readers, including some who might want and expect a kids-these-days approach, and that instead they will find in my book new ways to think about their students and their teaching.
At the end of the first blog in this series, I mentioned that this next blog would address the author questionnaire. I'll make sure we get to it eventually.
In the meantime, the semester starts on Monday. Best wishes for the new year to my teacher friends.